BCM 215 Reflection

For each of my comments I attempted to contribute some extra knowledge that may enhance the overall Digital Artefact for example my comment on Mitchel Barlow’s pitch I make the idea to target newer players to the monster hunter game series, as someone who very recently purchased the game I have found it to be quite tough to sink myself into it as im not sure what is going on most of the time and seem to stumble upon encounters. For Bennett Parkinson, I suggested more view involvement with polls to select the Pokémon he should talk about, this would help him in multiple ways such as picking a Pokémon to focus on (there are something like 400 Pokémon within sword and shield) and having a more active viewer base that will improve viewership.  For Kurt Dixon I suggested adding a style to his videos that makes them unique and draws people back to his videos using oversimplified as an example of history being told in a comedy style. I believe my suggestions to be quite helpful however I feel although I need to add more, ive never been good at the whole commenting thing and seeing other peoples comments on the pitches I commented on and my own pitch I feel I need to set up my game with my comments in the second round of comments. Now what did I learn and gain from this experience. Firstly, a lot of people have fantastic sounding Digital Artefacts, secondly, I need to work on trying to incorporate more subject materials and lecture readings into my comments.